"Barbie Doll"

I believe the poem "Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy is about the female image and how much pressure girls are under to be perfect. "The in the magic of puberty, a classmate said:/ You have a great big nose and fat legs"(lines 5-6). Even just one comment can burn that image into a persons mind and make them feel imperfect and that they have to change themselves, "So she cut off her nose and her legs/ and offered them up"(17-18). I thought this meant she had plastic surgery done to make her perfect in the eyes of others and that she had died. But when reading further on it said the undertaker had to put a putty nose on her face, so she must have actually cut herself. "Doesn't she look pretty? everyone said./Consummation at last./ To every woman a happy ending"(23-25). The whole time people thought she was pretty, but that one comment made by a classmate made her self-conscious and she tried to fix her imperfections but in the end she kills herself. So many girls feel self-conscious about themselves and it is impossible to live up to the barbie doll standard and the pressures sometimes put people over the edge.

"We Real Cool"

"We Real Cool" by Gwendolyn Brooks is about rebels and how rebelling can lead to death. "We real cool. We/ Left school"(lines 1-2). today many kids think skipping school, drinking, and getting into trouble makes them cool. "Lurk late"(3). kids sneek out at night just to hang out with friends, drink and get into trouble and again they think these things make them cool. But what most kids don't think of or realize is that these behaviors could lead them to their deaths "We/ Die soon"(7-8). This poem was written in 1959 and is still relevant today. Kids think that rebellious behaviors are cool and that others will like them more but in reality these behaviors kill many kids every day.

"The Man He Killed"

In the poem "The Man He Killed" by Thomas Hardy, I got the feeling the speaker didn't really want to kill the man but had to so he himself would not be killed. "I shot him dead because--/ because he was my foe"(lines 9-10). Also, he states "Had he and I but met/ by some old ancient inn,/ we should have sat us down to wet/ right many a nipperkin!"(1-4). I think the speaker is trying to say that if they were to have met under different circumstances they probably would have talked and been friends even and have a drink or two together, but this was war and they had to do what they had to do. This poem was quite interesting to read and learn that some had to kill just to survive and to fulfill their duties, not because they wanted to but because they had to.

"Fire and Ice"

I liked this poem "Fire and Ice" by Robert Frost, for the fact that it was simple and the tone was easier to understand. I believe this poem showed the feelings of indifference and hatred towards the world. The speaker didn't care which way the world ended. I believe that the speaker chose fire as his first choice because of the lines "From what I've tasted of desire I told with those who favor fire" (lines3-4). You can attach the word "desire" with "fire" such as burning (fire), intense, or consuming desire. The speaker's desire is being consumed with hate. I also feel that the speaker gives off almost a numb feeling and indifferent attitude. "Is also great And would suffice" (lines 8-9) this show that the speaker really doesn't care which way the world ends as long as it ends. The speaker says "I think I know enough hate" (line 6), perhaps the speaker is depressed or has numerous bad experiences throughout his life. I believe the speaker might be at a constant struggle as well, perhaps and inner and outer, like fire and ice which are opposites.

Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone

The poem "Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone" by W. H. Auden, got me to think. When someone close to you dies, it is natural to mourn their loss. Some people are able to move past it quickly while others feel as if the world has ended. At first I felt that the speaker was describing a famous person's death. "Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead/ Scribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead" (Lines 5-6). This action would be fitting if a public figure such as the president had died. While I continued to read, "My non, my midnight, my talk, my song/ I thought that love would last for ever: I was wrong" (Lines 11-12), I realized that it was the speaker's love that had died. I felt that the speaker was being a bit over dramatic, but that is understandable when you lose the love of your life. While the speaker may think that the clocks have stopped ticking and life can not move forward, they must remember that life can not just stop. "For nothing now can ever come to any good" (Line 16), is simply not true and it is not what her love would want for her.

"Porphyria's Lover"

When reading "Porphyrai's Lover" by Robert Browning, I thought it was going to be about a man and a woman engaging in an intimate moment and that was it. But as I got further into the poem I could tell it was actually about a man who kills his lover. "Too weak, for all her heart's endeavour,/ To set its struggling passion free/ from pride, and vainer ties dissever,/ And give herself to me for ever"(lines 21-24). I feel that these lines were the turning point in the poem, he knew she loved him and wanted to be with him and he did not want to lose her so he killed her so she will be with him forever. He said "That moment she was mine, mine, fair,/ perfectly pure and good: I found/ A thing to do , and all her hair/ In one long yellow string I wound/ Three times her little throat around,/ And strangled her. No pain felt she;"(36-41). He strangled her with her own hair and seemed not have no emotions about killing her, no remorse. He almost seemed to try and validate why it had to be done, so she couldn't leave him and had to be with him for ever. It's a very dark poem but definately an attention grabber, it kept my attention.

Barbie Doll

In the poem "Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy, I feel like everyone can relate to the pressures presented in this story. Barbie is a lie; no women could look like her, but that does not stop them from trying. The girl in the poem played with dolls and admired them like all little girls. When the time came for her to stop playing with dolls, she realized that she did not look like them. Even though, "She was healthy, tested intelligent" (Line 7), "Everyone saw a fat nose on thick legs" (Line 11). Even though she had many great qualities, society could not see past the physical "flaws" they labeled on her. I found it sad that she was so unhappy with her self that she felt that she needed to change her flaws, "So she cut off her nose and her legs" (Line 17). This action lead to her death, "In the casket displayed on satin she lay" (Line 19). In the end all she wanted was to be accepted, "Doesn't she look pretty? everyone said" (Line 23). So in once sense, there was a happy ending.

"Barbie Doll"

I believe that in this poem "Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy, describes how some women will change their appearance just to please others. I feel that in the beginning, she had a happy childhood and she was like any typical young girl that played with Barbies which have unrealistic proportions if you compared it to a human being. Society views that beauty resembles the look of a "Barbie Doll" and this is what is instilled in children at such a young age; children are given misguided conceptions of beauty. When she hit puberty, she was teased for her appearance, thus the girl didn't feel beautiful. She was also described as being healthy and intelligent by the speaker. The girl had inner beauty and should have been happy but yet she wasn't because others didn't see her for who she really was. On television you see women all the time getting plastic surgery to try to change their appearance to find happiness, but are they really doing it for themselves and afterward are they ever really truly happy? The girl tried to please everyone else so much that eventually she gave up. The line "So she cut off her nose and her legs and offered them up" (lines 17-18) does this mean that she did have plastic surgery to change her appearance? The next few lines it says "In the casket displayed on satin she lay with the undertaker's cosmetics painted on, a turned-up putty nose" (lines 19-21) So did she end up killing herself because she could never find happiness, and it was her only way to find peace? I couldn't believe the end when everyone said that she looked pretty when she was dead. The girl waited her entire life to be told that she was beautiful and was never able to hear it, they waited until after it was too late and she was dead. She had a fake nose and because she was dead her inner beauty was gone. Its unfortunate that some people view beauty in this manner. She was beautiful all along and didn't know it. It kind of made me feel sick at the end and really empathetic for her.

"The Man He Killed"

In this poem, the narrator leads me to believe if these two men would have met in person, they would have been friends. Hardy writes, "Had he and I but met/By some old ancient inn" (lines 1-2). These two men went to fight for their country. They left their civilian lives where jobs were of short supply. They both decided to enlist. "He thought he'd list, perhaps,/Off-hand-like-just as I-" (lines 13-14). As in war, one really doesn't know why they aim to kill a person. They just know it's their job. Not stopping to think this person has a family, like them. The narrator states, "Yes; quaint and curious war is!/You shoot a fellow down"(lines 17-18). If he would have had a chance to meet this man he killed, he might of changed his mind.

"Porphyria's Lover"

Reading this poem, "Porphyria's Lover", lead me to the unexpected. While I started reading, I figured it was going to be about an intimate moment between two lovers. I never expected murder. I enjoyed reading this poem because of its Irony. How the speaker realized that she loved him and he didn't want to lose that feeling, so he decided to keep her forever by killing her. The speaker also reassures himself that murdering her was okay by justifying that he was sure she felt no pain. " No pain felt she; I am quite sure she felt no pain" (Lines 41-42) When he said this, you knew he was deluded and that he didn't wish to hurt her and that he was killing her out of love. The speaker also mentions her yellow hair a few times, he sees her hair when she's full of life and later he uses it to kill her. The speaker also mentions his cheek when she is alive and after he kills her he mentions her cheek. I thought it was interesting how he described her when she was alive and when she was dead and in both instances he described it as if they are in love with each other and will be together forever and that this is what she would have wanted. Overall, I liked the way this poem was written, it kept me intrigued throughout.

"Barbie Doll"

In the poem, "Barbie Doll", the subject seemed to be happy growing up as a young child. She played with dolls and not caring about how she looked. She was content with just being a child. She was happy until puberty hit. We can all relate to the major change this was in our lives and the ackward feelings that come with it. Classmates can be critical on how you look and picking out your shortcomings. Piercy writes, "Then in the magic of puberty, a classmate said:/You have a great big nose and fat legs" (lines 5-6). This time can be hard in anyone's life and words of that nature can hurt for a very long time, as it did in this poem. She offered up her inperfections for aprroval of her peers. The narrator states, "Doesn't she look pretty? everyone said./Consummation at last(lines 23-24). It's too bad that some people just see what's on the outside and not what's within.

"The Man He Killed" Poem #5

My first thoughts on this poem before reading the explanation of it was that it was two men fighting over work, the one was no longer able to work so he sold his traps "Was out of work-had sold his traps" (Line 15) ; maybe he was no longer getting very much money and the price of furs were down. So in this struggle to hold on to jobs the one man killed the other because he threatened his job and also his ability to work. After reading the explanation under the poem I found that it had nothing to do with that except it was about a man at war, or explaining to someone about a man he shot, which was all his duty at the price of war. It must have been very emotionally traumatizing to him to have to go to war, and than come back home after surviving and explaining to someone how he had killed a man or many "I shot at him as he at me/and killed him in his place" (7-8). In wars there is no negotiating, it is just fighting to survive as neither side can have sympathies or feelings towards another man otherwise you will be killed. You must be tough and show no emotions if you are to survive an ordeal such as this. In the ending he capped it off with "You shoot a fellow down/You'd treat if met where any bar is" (18-19). In those last few lines he is saying that war is strange, because if you were to meet this man in a normal situation you would talk freely and treat him with a beer or possibly some food.

"Moving Camp Too Far" Poem #4

I found that this poem was very true, every word of it. The one lines that I did not understand was "counting coup/or taking scalps" (lines 6-7). I understood the taking scalps but not the counting coup. I looked up coup and the defintion was something like a small group of people overthrowing the government. Maybe this meant the indians working to keep their territiories, and also the fighting for it. Some battles lost but many others were won. The days from when the indians roamed free and hunted buffalo were a long time ago. Now many of the Native Americans left today only have the small reminders on tourist info and what they hear from their family to tell them of how it really was to "...hunt buffalo/or do the ghost dance" (9-10). I think it is great how the Native Americans have not let go of their ancestry as they still do things such as powwows and kept many of their old customs considering how civilized everything in the United States has become since those days. This poem was very straightforward and easy for me to understand. She worded it very well and definetely helped me to see what she was feeling.

The Man He Killed

When I read this I got an image in my head of an elderly man in a bar with a beer in his hand telling old stories with another elderly man. This poem was well written and i'm sure many many many war veterans feel just the same as this man did. This man killed another man when they were standing face to face. (I shot at him as he at me, And killed him in his place) The man did not want to go to war I feel and is torn on the fact that he had to murder someone to save his own life. (I shot him dead because-- because he was my foe.) The man had no other reason to shoot him he says and was just there to do his duty. Im sure many many others felt this way after they got drafted and were sent there to kill others. This poem was a great poem to read for me because I have friends in the military and are proud to be there and I enjoy reading about it.

We Real Cool

I really enjoyed the poem "we real cool" mainly because these are my favorite types of poems. I like the short ones that quickly get the point across instead of a long story. In this poem I believe it is about kids in high school dropping out and being rebelious and thinking they are cool for it. (We real cool. We left school. Line 1) I also believe it is stating that they walk around late at night and and drink. And that they won't have much of a life and would have their life ended early because of it. (We die soon. Last line) I feel this poem had a very maternal feeling to it and I think the author Gwendolyn brooks had a soft spot for people like this.

"The Man He Killed"

I enjoyed reading the poem “The Man He Killed”. This man is telling someone his war stories while enjoying a drink. He tells about how he shot him right when he appeared “and killed him in his place.” (line 8) He was being approached by the enemy, and of course would shoot right away instead of being in the position of being shot first. I think that he feels bad that he killed him because he probably enlisted for the same reason as the narrator. “Off-hand like just as I/Was out of work had sold his traps/No other reason why (lines 14, 15, & 16). He has respect for the man he killed, but yet had to do what he did in order to survive himself. I think war is a very difficult thing to experience and since I have never had to, I will not understand what it truly is like. But I think if I was in that position I would be more worried about keeping my own life and would do what I have to without thinking twice about it.

"Barbie Doll"

The poem “Barbie Doll” shows how much pressure women and young girls have on them to be perfect like a Barbie doll. It shows you what the stereotype for young is like, it starts out with the toys that they should (and or do) play with. “and miniature GE stoves and irons” (line 2) “This girlchild was born as usual” (line 1), she played with all the right toys and did things just as she was supposed to do until, “The in the magic of puberty, a classmate said:/ You have a great big nose and fat legs.” (lines 5 & 6). All of the sudden she wasn’t the “usual girlchild” and was made fun of and hurt just because she was different. This poem is really sad, but pretty accurate on the pressure girls undergo. There is this “Barbie doll” image that so many girls strive for, but is an unrealistic to achieve. Though, with more women having cosmetic surgery it’s becoming more common. She struggled with the pressure to look like someone she was not and thought she had to be ashamed of it. “She went to and fro apologizing” (line 10) Even with trying to change herself with dieting, and exercising, she felt it wasn’t enough. “Her good nature wore out” (line 15) Sometimes the pressure can be too much where you have to do something drastic to get away from it. “She cut off her nose and legs” (line 17) Then “in the casket displayed on the satin she lay” (line 19) she finally reached the goal of everyone’s approval. “Consummation at last” (line 24).

Ozymandias

when i read ozymandias i was under the inpression that he was a king traveling and meet someone in the dessert. the man that he meet in the dessert was tore apart his limbs were everywhere and he was dieing. Ozymandias was telling him that he was an almighty king and lived beyond the mountains. To me sounded like he was begging to the older man that he is a king and the other one was not and that he left him there to decay in the dessert by himself. I did find this poem to be a hard one to read and understand what was going on in it as well.

The Man He Killed

When I first read this poem I was not sure what was going on it seened like the two guys just meet and the one just shot him, but when I read it again it sounded more like they were at war and that they had ran into each other at a hotel and both went to go get liquor. they both shot at each other but only one had died. It sounds like to me that the one man or soldier was talking about how bad the war was and that he didn't want to be shooting anyone anymore. maybe he was feeling bad for killing people even though he was being shot at himself.

Fire and Ice

I read Robert Frost's poem Fire and Ice. I have read some of his poems before. I do enjoy reading his poems. When reading the poem to me it sounds like the world will end either by fire or by ice but either way he doesn;t care because he likes both of them. I enjoy reading poems that do rythm because to me it has a certain rythem to it that i like to read. Also when you read it the speaker sounds like he or she is agree about one thing or the other.