Not a very original title to change it too but this writer is exhausted from the past week.
One could change this poem into one regarding young men physical and intellectual ideas may still be utilized. To liven it up even more one could change the state of a young gay man which would even fill in with the current writing.
In order to change it to a young man's poem one would look at the toys young boys play with. The trucks, guns, cowboys and Indian type games they played. They too may test intelligent. There are instances of young men who have issues with their looks just as young woman have. A male though may have an issue with being shorter than others his age or may have had a comment he could not let go regarding his masculinity.
This is a horribly written blog. Overall it is a sad poem in the fact that the young girl let the thoughts and ideas of others intrude upon her life in such a way. The same could happen to a young man and in all reality has done so over the years.
Monday, March 30, 2009
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