Saturday, October 3, 2009
Doe Season
Andy thinks the ocean is like the world, "huge and empty, yet always moving." (par 45). Andy feels the ocean is similar to the unknown. As a child becomes older, they tend to venture out farther into the world and they learn all of the obstacles that a person must overcome to survive. Andy states, "If you walked in it, you couldn't see how deep it was or what might be below; if you swam, something could pull you under and you'd never be seen again." (par 45). This means that when you walk out into the world for the first time, say as a high school graduate, you are not quite sure how far to venture, you are a little intimidated by the unknown. If you swim a little farther out, meaning if you get caught up into something like drugs or the wrong crowd of people, it could break you.
Doe Season Question #3
"Doe Season"
Friday, October 2, 2009
"Doe Season"
"Doe Season"
This story is about a father taking his daughter on a deer hunting trip with friends. The friends throughout this story don’t think that a girl should be hunting. Andy must make a decision of being a girl or a boy. She recalls the woods and then she thinks about the sea which means different things to her.
Andy found the woods to be a great place to walk and spot animals. She thought, “the woods are the same and they stretch all the way to here.” (Doe season) This thought made her feel good and then she thought of God. I think this good feeling represents her childhood because it relaxes her to think the woods are the same. At this point she doesn’t need to make a decision to grow up or choose who she will be. She is comfortable thinking she will be the same no matter what she does or where she goes.
Andy did not like the thought of the ocean. “it frightened her. It was huge and empty, yet always moving.” (Doe season) The thought of the ocean is a change, the thought of growing up or becoming something different. She was afraid of feeling empty, yet in the last paragraph this is how she felt.
"The Chrysanthemums"
Doe season
She had very different feelings about the ocean than she did the woods, the first time she had seen the ocean “it frightened her.” (459). She described the ocean as “huge and empty, yet always moving. Everything lay hidden…” (459). The ocean was like adulthood, both unknown and frightening for her, the way she feels about each the ocean and the woods shows the transition she has to make from childhood to adulthood.
-Colleen
Thursday, October 1, 2009
Yellow wallpaper
This story is about a woman who has recently had a baby, but doesn’t feel quite right anymore. Her husband and brother are doctors, but they say she is just fine. In this story her husband takes her to a remote house to get better. This woman rarely talks about her baby and doesn’t want to be hidden away. She asks to have visitors, but her husband says she isn’t ready for guests.
This woman doesn’t like the house that her husband has her stay in. She first complains about the wallpaper. She doesn’t like the design or color on the wall. She says, “I never saw worse paper in all my life.” (Yellow wallpaper line 33) When the couple first gets to the house she says, “I would say a haunted house.”(Yellow wallpaper line 2) She got the feeling that the house was very different and something wasn’t right.
The character’s mood changes at about line 85 after she starts focusing on the wallpaper patterns. She claims in certain light, “I can see a strange, provoking, formless sort of figure, which seems to skunk about behind that silly and conspicuous front design.”(Yellow Wallpaper line 81)
This woman could have been cured with the right diagnosis. She was suffering from depression after having a baby. Doctors are very careful to diagnose this early now, but then maybe weren’t well known. Postpartum depression can be very serious and make a person go crazy without proper help.
Doe Season
The Lottery
"Doe Season"
In Andy's memories of the ocean, it frightened her, kind of like growing into adulthood, somewhat scarey, not knowing what lied beneath the water is kind of like not knowing what lies ahead when growing up. In the end when she ran from the men gutting the deer, she could also hear her mother's voice, "come in, come in"(467). It was all so frightening for her she tried to run from growing up.
Monday, September 28, 2009
"I Stand Here Ironing"
"The Lottery"
The Lottery
The ritual of the annual Lottery could have similarities to our hometown summer festival. The townspeople anticipated the day and participated with loyal conviction. Seen as somewhat of a social gathering, the children played while the menfolk discussed crops and taxes. Yet the men were not talking lightheartedly, they were heavy with the responsibility that would befall them. "Their jokes were quiet and they smiled rather than laughed." (pg. 405)
"The villagers kept their distance, leaving a space between themselves and the stool." (pg. 406) showed that even though they were in attendance, there was a dislike for the black box and what it would mean for one of them. That the box was black is significant, as is the marking on the paper being a black dot, after all, black signifies death.
The significance in the town square is that the village is the center of all. There is a hierarchy here that the town comes first. Then the men, who drew first for their household. If the man of the home wasn't able, the wife or an adult son drew for the family. It was a responsibility to the town, not a privilege. The family is treated only as a unit and I find it unusual that even the youngest children are obligated to partake in the drawing and little Davy was given stones to throw at his own mother. Parents did not shield their children from the violence, rather they insisted they were a part of it. Even so far as Mrs. Hutchinson calling out that her daughter and son-in-law need to draw and face the possibility of death. And when Nancy and Bill Jr. opened theirs, they "both beamed and laughed" (pg. 410) even though this meant that one of their parents would face a stoning.
The author also shows how personal friendship is of no value in this town either. Mrs. Delacroix was chatting with Mrs. Hutchinson and acting as they here old friends, yet in the end, Mrs. Delacroix was in the front of the crowd, holding a rock so heavy, she needed both hands to lift it. The significance of this part of the story in relationship to the author is that she felt her town had never accepted her, that they town would have turned their back on her friendship, doing only what was good for the town, even if it meant harm to their own.
"The Lottery"
When the black box is first mentioned, it gives one a sense that the whatever they may win may not be something that they want. A black box has never been known to hold something grand, generally it is something evil. Also, the black box that they use is made of old pieces of the original box which gives a sense of how old this tradition really is in this village. It must be something bad if no one wants to make a new box. They don't want to replicate the box, for fear that something even worse could happen if they did.
The paper containing the names are opened up with hesitation each time. Even Old Man Warner, who states he has been in the lottery 77 times, holds his breath until he hears his name. With the name "Old Man Wanner" it makes one think that he is quite knowledgeable of this whole process. He has been through this more times than any one else that is present and knows what this all means.
Shouts of unfairness are to be heard up until the very end. " "I think we should start over," Mrs. Hutchinson said, as quietly as she could. "I tell you it wasn't fair." "(p. 410) It was like she had a sense from that point that she was going to be the winner, even though they weren't even through calling names. Sometimes in a lottery the winner can actually end up being the loser.
"The Storm"
The Storm
At the end of the story on page 259 the last sentence is written, “So the storm passed and everyone was happy.” As in real life, usually after the storm passes outside, the sun comes out and sometimes there is even a rainbow. A happy ending after a
whirlwind of forces.
"The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson
Doe Season
In the story “Doe Season” David Kaplan’s character Andy is going through a transition from childhood to adulthood. Andy sees the woods as being “the same woods” (456). This description is how Andy sees her childhood. Her childhood stays the same and makes her feel good and safe. She knows what to expect already from her childhood but she isn’t sure about being an adult. She feels the same of being an adult as she feels about the ocean. She finds the ocean (and her transition into adulthood) to be scary. An example of this in the text is “Everything lay hidden. If you walked in it, you couldn’t see how deep it was or what might be below; if you swam, something could pull you under and you would never be seen again” (459). Andy was too afraid when she visited the ocean to go into water or to become an adult. Parts of being an adult even embarrassed Andy and made her uncomfortable like when her mother’s top came off in the water or when Mac brought up the conversation about her seeing a “pecker” (460). This showed how innocent Andy truly was. In order to go into adulthood she has to, in a sense, lose some of that innocence. Until Andy was ready she couldn’t cross the barrier of being a child to being an adult. Andy must step out of her comfort zone of feeling safe and having everything be the same and enter into a world where “everything lay hidden” (459). At the end of the story Andy had finally lost some of her innocence and realized that the ocean (adulthood) was too close to turn back on. An example of this in the story is “like the ocean where her mother floated in green water, also calling Come in, Come in, while all around her roared the mocking of the terrible, now inevitable, sea” (467). Andy had no choice but to become Andrea and enter into the world that was full of unknowns like the ocean and leave the safe world of the unchanging forest behind her.
"The Storm"
"A Worn Path"
Along her path, Phoenix encounters multiple antagonists. The first is a thorny bush which “never want to let folks pass,” (450). This can be compared to slave traders, refusing to let slaves escape their imprisonment. As she progresses through fields she states that she “heard of nary death close by,” (451) and even when a gun is held to her face she does not fear it. Another struggle comes in the form of the nurse at the doctor’s office who is not familiar with Phoenix and assumes her for “a charity case,” (453) which must have been a common stereotype in that era.
Throughout the entire story Phoenix encounters adversity and overcomes. She signifies many worn generations that had to fight for everything because at that time they had no rights. Also, true to her name, she signifies a rebirth, or new way of life, a sign of things to come for her people.
"The Chrysanthemums"
I Stand Here Ironing ~ Unit 5
Although the narrator believes she has failed as a mother with Emily, she didn’t have the resources to help foster the growth of her daughter. “It was the only place there was. It was the only way we could be together, the only way I could hold a job” (284). She had to make sacrifices as a single mother if she wanted to keep her children, and she had made a significant effort to show Emily that she was loved, although it was often after she was completely exhausted. “I would start running as soon as I got off the streetcar, running up the stairs…” (284). The narrator has not shown signs of being an inadequate mother, but rather, she was forced to choose between being a supportive, loving mother to Emily and fulfilling her role as the sole financial supporter of the family.
The conversation also depicts a somber picture of the day as well as the clothes. When the men began to gather “their jokes were quiet and they smiled instead of laughed” (405) suggesting that this time was not for a joyous gathering. Both the way the villagers were dressed and the tone of conversation before the lottery, gives readers an insight to the rest of the story.
-Colleen P
The Lottery
Kirzner and Mandell. Literature:reading,reacting,writing. 2007.
Sunday, September 27, 2009
I Stand Here Ironing
The Storm
"The Lottery" - Everything is not as it seems
Does Shirley Jackson give us “The Lottery” to serve as a symbol of horror in a world torn apart by indifference to our fellow man, or does Jackson just give us an interesting story with a strange twist? The setting is a little town on a beautiful morning, ”clear and sunny, with the fresh warmth of a full summer day; the flowers were blossoming profusely and the grass was richly green” (405), making the reader believe that a sweet story is on the way. What Jackson actually does is to hit us in the face with an ironic twist, proving that everything is not always what it seems to be.
In a quaint village square “between the post office and the bank” (405), a symbol of anywhere USA where June Cleaver may be baking cookies in the kitchen, the villagers meet to carry out a bizarre ritual referred to as the lottery. No one questions the ageless tradition because “there’s always been a lottery” (405). When someone does talk about doing away with the lottery they are put down by Old Man Warner, calling them “a pack of crazy fools” (405). This old man has been through the lottery 77 times, so the tradition is just a part of his existence. Just as his name implies, Old Man Warner is always warning the town of the danger of doing away with the lottery.
It is very interesting to note that the black box, the ultimate symbol of doom, and the one thing that seems to represent the tradition of the lottery to the villagers, is given very little respect during the 364 days of the year that it is not needed. It is stored “sometimes one place, sometimes another” (406). This extremely important icon is treated with total disregard every day except June 27th, when it is treated with reverence. Why doesn’t it have a permanent home throughout the year? Perhaps it is because doom is not relegated to one place and one time, but is everywhere and all the time if we are unfortunate enough to be in its way. Like the slips of paper, and the black spot that announces the “winner” of the lottery, life is a chance that can bring us good or bad tidings; it is luck of the draw.
For Tessie Hutchinson, who comes running into the square still wearing her apron, showing that she is just an everyday person doing everyday things, her luck is about to run out. As her family draws the unlucky slip of paper showing that one of her own will be stoned to death, she is visibly and vocally upset. Her husband seems to be upset by her reaction telling her to “shut up, Tessie” (409). She is upset and concerned for her family, he is just one of the crowd wanting to get it over with. Tessie’s luck has run out as it is determined that she is the one to be stoned to death, making her realize that being one of the sheep and blindly following tradition is wrong as she screams “it isn’t fair, it isn’t right” (411). It is too late for her, but what about the rest of the world?