Tuesday, November 10, 2009
essay
Monday, November 9, 2009
Topic Proposal
Poetry Analysis
In my essay, I will compare the similarities and differences between the two poems. The similarities between the two poems are both are discussing war and death. Each poet has a different attitude towards war, one seems to be very casual (Hardy) and the other one is disillusioned. (Owen) In both of the poems, they are discussing the experiences that they went thorough because of war. Both authors of the poems have different viewpoints about war. In the first poem by Hardy, the poem is about war and death and his viewpoint about war is a matter of fact tone. I had to do what I had to do or be killed. In the second poem by Owen, it was very graphic and descriptive of what really was taken place in the war. It lets readers visualize what soldiers are going through and have to face while fighting for one’s country.
"Topic proposal poetry essay"
Poetry Essay
Comparing Poetry ~ Brook M. Wilken
Poetry Essay Idea
Different Perspectives of War
Elizabeth Hillukka
Comparison poetry blog
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Brainstorming thoughts for poetry comparison
Comparison Essay
"Topic Proposal"
Topic Proposal
Carly Turchin
Analytical paper topic
Theme for "porphyria's lover"
Poetry Essay
Saturday, November 7, 2009
Poetry Essay
Theme- "Porphyria's Lover"
Wednesday, November 4, 2009
Topic Proposal "Porphyria's Lover" and "My Last Duchess"
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
"Porphyria's Lover" Theme
Tone in "To Coy His Mistress"
"Macho Man"
Poetry Essay
Theme of "To His Coy Mistress"
Tone of "To His Coy Mistress
The tone of the first stanza of Andrew Marvell’s “To His Coy Mistress” seems to be one of flirtatiousness. As the title would indicate, she is not going to be an easy catch, and the young man must use all of his wits to entice her to give in to him. Marvell uses hyperbole throughout the first part of the poem to express the speakers desire to be with the young lady. The young man exaggerates time by indicating that his love for her is eternal by saying “I would/Love you ten years before the Flood,/And you should, if you please, refuse/Till the conversion of the Jews” (lines7-10). He continues by telling her he would spend 100 years just looking at her eyes and forehead (13-14), and “Two hundred to adore each breast” (15). The speaker would seem to say anything to make the young lady believe he is completely enamored with her.
The second stanza becomes much darker in tone, to one of sadness over the passage of time. The young man changes his approach from one of loving compliments to describing what will happen to them in death. He wants her to know that “Time’s winged chariot hurrying near” (22) will steal her beauty and put her in her grave (25-26). The speaker uses images of death and decomposition to try to get to the young lady’s vanity, and perhaps change her mind. He is saying to her that life is short, and she should keep that in mind while she is pushing him away.
In the last stanza, the tone changes again to one that is passionate. The young man finally appeals to the young lady’s sexual desires, invoking images of her “every pore with instant fires” (36) and “amorous birds of prey” (38). He pleads with her to “roll all our strength and all/Our sweetness up into one ball/And tear our pleasures with rough strife” (41-43). He hopes that at this point he has awakened her senses and convinced her to give in to him.
Looking at this poem as a whole, the tone is one of insincerity. The young man never proves his case by flirting with the young lady, scaring her about losing her good looks in death, or turning on her desire for him. The type of behavior exhibited by the young man in this poem could have been written in 1681 or in 2009. Time marches on, but things between men and women never really change.
"Porphyria's Lover"
Irony in Porphyria's Lover
"Ozymandias"
My essay on poems
The two poems I will be comparing are about love. These two poems will be Porphyria’s Lover and My Last Duchess. These two poems are both written by the same author Robert Browning. The two poems are both considered a Dramatic monologue because it includes a listener and speaker as well. These stories are both told or spoken by males about their woman. The similarities of these two poems are a man and woman are involved, in both something has happened to the woman, and in both poems the woman symbolizes possession. The major difference is that in one there is a death and in one there is murder. These men each talk about physical appearances as they look at their woman and both thought that they should only be for them. These men seem to have the same personal issues such as: jealousy, selfish, self esteem, and some insecurity. The poems imagery is different as they are in different places with different things happening at that time. In Porphyria’s lover, “The rain set early in to-night.” (Browning 719) In My Last Duchess, “That’s my last Duchess painted on the wall.” (Browning 702) Christina Montag
My Poem Essay
I am planning on writing my essay as a comparison between the poems “Do not go gentle into that good night” and “Those Winter Sundays”. Both of these stories are about a son’s relationship with his father. In the poem “Do not go gentle into that good night” the son is pleading with his father to not die. In the poem “Those Winter Sundays” the son wishes he had realized everything his father had done for him sooner in life. He doesn’t realize this until is he older. In both stories there is a bond between the fathers and the sons. One that seems to not be realized until it is too late. In “Those Winter Sundays” the son seems to be thinking back and realizing he never told his father that he appreciated what he did for him. It is almost as if he wishes he could. Both stories show the bond between father and son that isn’t realized until it is too late. In my essay I want to focus on the father/son bond and how sometimes it is only realized how much your father has done for you when it is too late. In both poems the speaker was realizing what their father meant to them. The speaker in “Those Winter Sundays” realized it when he could never tell his father how much he appreciated it and the speaker in “Do not go gentle into that good night” realizes this as his father is on his death bed and he doesn’t want him to die.
My Last Duchess
Theme of To His Coy Mistress
Porphyria's Lover-Theme
Barbie Doll
Ozymandias
Barbie Doll to Prince Doll
Symbolism of To His Coy Mistress
Tone of Porphyria's Lover
Symbolism of "To His Coy Mistress"
Imagery of Ode to a Grecian Urn
My last Duchess
This man was a Duke which is why his wife was considered a duchess. This man wanted his wife to be possession for only him to see. He really didn’t like having everyone see his wife in her portrait because she looked so lifelike. As a duke he is higher up in social status because a lot of people are lower status than this. He claims, “Of joy into the duchess cheek.” (Browning 703) He did not seem to care about his wife in person, but only as a trophy to keep to himself. He seems to focus more on her looks as he talks about her. The duke, “The curtain I have drawn for you.” (Browning 703) He tried to hide her away for only him to see whenever he wanted. The words he uses make me think that he was jealous of his wife and that she was so beautiful. The duke also seems selfish because he wants to keep the duchess all to himself. Everything he says seems to have something to do with himself even if he is talking about someone else. The duke also seems insecure because he holds onto the duchesses’ picture to prove status. He is showing the portrait to the father of the woman he wants to marry. Maybe he is trying to use this to show what he has had for possession in the past. He does this to prove his good taste or possibly his status. Christina Montag
Barbie Blog
If this poem were to be changed for a male I would call it Ken. This is because that is the name of the male Barbie and the figure a man is to have can still be compared. The male is supposed to be pictured as muscular and in shape. In this poem the woman is portrayed as, “she went to and fro apologizing”. (Piercy 991) It is also said, “lipsticks the color of cherry candy”. (Piercy 991) Transformed for a guy these would probably have something to do with playing sports or the type of work they do. Any man who shows some emotion may be called names or not considered to be a man. All males are supposed to be considered the head of the household and take care of their family. In the poem Barbie, “exercise, diet, smile, and wheedle”. (Piercy 991) In this time period women were to stay home, care for children, and take care of the house. Males were to go to work and provide for the family. They made the choices around the house and expected certain things to be done. Like anyone male or female all these expectations can get very old and sickening. In this poem, “She cut off her nose and her legs and offered them up.” (Piercy 991) In the end we all end up dead and in a casket where people find something good to say about you.
Christina Montag
Bobby Doll
Monday, November 2, 2009
"Barbie Doll"
"My Last Duchess"
Ozymandias
"My Last Dutchess"
Now the duke is a very high noble man and he is the ruler of Farra. But as the poem goes on, you begin to realize he is also the ruler of his own wife. This obbsessive, dictative lifestyle, eventually led to the own murder of his wife.
"Barbie Doll"
The Bratz Dolls give a very distorted look at todays society. Are they trying to portray that it's ok for teenagers to be snotty and "brats"? Are they trying to say it's ok to wear tiny little miny skirts and an excuse of a t-shirt? It's hard to understand that a company is actually putting a product out there. All it does is give a distorted image of how a women should look, to young children.
Barbie Doll
"Barbie Doll"
dictation of Ode on a Grecian Urn
symbolism in To His Coy Mistress
Dictation in Porphyria's Lover
"My Last Duchess"
Barbie Doll
Ozymandias
"Barbie Doll"
"Porphyria's Lover" Irony
"Ozymandias"
Irony in Porphyria's Lover
Porphyria “made her smooth white shoulder bare”(719) in giving herself to the speaker because of her love to him. She offers herself unconditionally and how ironic that the speaker would murder her with her own hair for such a gift.
The speaker was so proud, “Porphyria worshipped me,”(720) he says and because of this worship and love the speaker wants to preserve something so special he decides to kill her so he will always have her love, that she will not be able to give it to anyone else.
The last few sentences of the poem start off with “Porphyria’s love: she guessed not how Her darling one wish would be heard” (720) shows how the irony continues in the poem from the beginning to the end. Her one wish was granted, to be with the speaker, and now she will be with him forever.
Theme of "Ode on a Grecian Urn"
The second stanza seems to apply to a courting couple. The speaker tells them even though they will never kiss, the man should not be sad because his lover “cannot fade” (979). Their love will always remain.
Stanza three also offers another portrait of never ending spring and the joy that comes with it. However, it takes on a bit of a sour note at the end stating the “happy love…leaves a heart high-sorrowful and cloy’d” (979). The speaker is saying it leaves the heart sick from too much sweetness.
Finally in the last stanza, the poem comes together. While all the other stanzas relate to the ornate story the urn tells, the last stanza relates to the mystery of existence. This urn is beautiful, but it only ends up reminding us of death; and long after we are gone, the urn will live on as a reminder to man saying: “Beauty is truth, truth beauty.” (980) True beauty can only be discovered through life. Beauty is reality and reality is beautiful.
"My Last Duchess" (Unit 9)
Ozymandias
In the first sentence there is talk of “an antique land”. This represents something that is old. In the fourth sentence the words “half sunk” and “shattered” also represent something that is falling apart. While reading this poem, these words automatically put scenarios in my head of something falling apart, that it is old and decrepit. There are also words of “colossal wreck” and “remains” which are also descriptive words of something falling apart.
The various speakers represent a weak person and a strong person and that a strong person can become weak over time. This again is implying that nothing lasts.
The one thing that does last in this poem is the sand. It is in the beginning of the poem in the description of the “trunkless legs of stone, Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand,”. It is also in the last sentence, “The lone and level sands stretch far away.” This tells me that the sand was there for the statue to crumble upon and that when you look out over the land the sand is always there.
Barbie Doll
In the first stanza I would change the sentence “dolls that did pee-pee” to guns that made noise. I would also change “miniature GE stoves and irons” to footballs and dirt bikes. I would think that to a boy, being made fun of their physical body, as in being scrawny would hurt their pride, along with being book smart. In my mind, boys like to be seen as “jocks” or the big man on campus, who has it all, including; athletic body, great hair, and pretty girls that hang on them. It usually does not include being the smartest one in class.
The second stanza would have to change in the manner that a boy would not go around apologizing for who they are as a girl would. A boy, I would imagine, would let the criticism infest inside him until he exploded. Think Columbine!
I think that girls are more advised to try to change themselves and their images than boys are. Girls are more emotional seekers than boys are and they like to think of everyone liking them.
The last three lines of the poem is the most powerful. “Doesn’t she look pretty? Everyone said. Consummation at last. To every women a happy ending.” This means that the girl finally made everyone think that she is pretty and that they all like her even though she had to take her own life to make it happen.
My Last Duchess (Unit 9)
My Last Duchess
Laura Brown
Ozymandias End
Tone/Reactions - Porphyria's Lover
Barbie Doll
"Barbie Doll" - Perfection Required for Everyone
The pressures of living in today’s society are enormous. Whether you are a Barbie or a Ken, everyone is expected to be successful, to maintain a healthy lifestyle, and to be beautiful both inside and out. When Marge Piercy wrote “Barbie Doll” in 1973, these same pressures to succeed were already in place for the young people coming up in the world. Throughout the ages, it has always been difficult to be a female and to mold to whatever role you were destined to play, whether it was as a scullery maid, a housewife and mother, or a powerful player in the business world. We sometimes forget those same pressures were and are put on young men as well. They have always been expected to be the provider, the protector, and the powerful businessman. Above all, look your best.
Piercy is focusing on the outside beauty in this poem, and what happens when someone smashes a young girls self esteem. But where Piercy writes “Then in the magic of puberty, a classmate said:/You have a great big nose and fat legs” (lines 5,6) she could have been writing about a male or a female. The passages that refer to feminine items and ideas could easily be changed into masculine form. Where the young girl is “presented dolls that did pee-pee/and miniature GE stoves and irons/and wee lipsticks the color of cherry candy” (2-4), a young boy would be given plastic soldiers, toy guns, racing cars, little pretend shaving kits. Where “She was advised to play coy” (12), a young man could be advised to be strong. When “she cut off her nose and her legs/and offered them up” (17,18) the only thing that would have to change, and still show the horror that this young person must have been living, is the word she to he.
When we, as a society put such pressure on our children to be perfect, there can only be an unhappy ending. In real life, there is no fairy tale existence, and we must each be happy with the way we are. Piercy knew this, and this poem is screaming at us to get that point across.
Barbie Doll
My Last Duchess
Missy McCleary
"Ozymandias" - Ashes to Ashes
Things disappear. Material possessions eventually are lost, either to carelessness or time. Anything that can be touched, physically felt, held in your hands will eventually break down and return to the earth. This is the message the speaker in Percy Bysshe Shelley’s poem “Ozymandias” is trying to get across. The imagery of the statue of Ramses II, one of Egypt’s greatest rulers laying “Half sunk, a shattered visage lies,” (line 4) creates a picture of a dynasty long gone. The traveler has told the speaker that “Two vast and trunkless legs of stone/Stand in the desert” (2,3) creating a vision of nothing but sand with a broken statue jutting out. This alone evokes a feeling of loneliness which is echoed in the final line of the poem “The lone and level sands stretch far away” (14). Shelley appears to be writing a warning to the world that no matter who you are or how powerful you were in your lifetime, you too will end up returning to dust. The story that the traveler tells the speaker will live on, as it is passed from one person to another. The poem and its artistic value will live on, as it is read by countless people throughout the ages.
Theme- Porphyria's Lover
Sunday, November 1, 2009
Theme of Ode on a Grecian Urn
Mood of To His Coy Mistress
Barbie Doll ~ Brook M.Wilken
Irony of Porphyria's Lover
My Last Duchess~ Brook M. Wilken
Barbie Doll or Ken Doll
Ozymandias
Barbie Doll
If I had to re-title the story for the theme towards men I would have to call it “superman”. I would name it this because society and all the negative inspirations out there people tend to think they are superman and can do whatever they want. This is not a good thing.
I would use a gun as the tool to men hate towards themselves and others after watching the crime that is being committed all over the world. I would also use a man with big muscles to show that men think that they are the strong human of the two sexes. I really do not agree with my own ideas but it would work for me to show the digestive perspective that men acquire. The diction I would use is he, and words that show hate on others.
"Barbie Doll" or "G.I. John"
"My Last Duchess"
Ozymandias
I did notice that Percy says the passions do not fade and are still there. Sometimes I look at my life and see that I have lots of things and not so much passions, I would hope I can get to the point of this poem and make sure I know what is important. I find it interesting that Ozymandias wants them to look at his work regardless of the despair that they are in. I take this as to not forget things that are important to you no matter what everyone else thinks.
I really like this poem, but I think that I need to read it more to really understand it because I feel like I am misinterpreting it in some way.
Saturday, October 31, 2009
Macho Man
"Ozymandias"
Barbie JOE
The second stanza could stay relatively the same aside from going to and fro apologizing—because I know boys don’t do that! Also some rewording could be used to describe the new soldier’s shooting skills.
Finally in the last stanza, the line that sticks out most to me is: “Her good nature wore out like a fan belt.”(991) How wonderfully descriptive! This seems like a timeless statement that could be applied to everybody in the world who has encountered stress in their lives to the point where they feel they can’t take it anymore (especially GI JOE). So they blew off his nose and legs and offered them up. This statement can be the most powerful anti-war slogan of the poem. This leads to the casket description where everyone says: Doesn’t he look like a hero? Freedom at last.